HomeCalendarFAQSearchMemberlistUsergroupsRegisterLog in
Welcome to Naruto: Shinobi Senso | All Ranks and Villages are Open | Advertising Event Going On Now | New Area Applications Being Accepted | Jinchuuriki and Kage Spots Open
Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
Top posters
Admin
 
Alucard
 
Shuri
 
Daisuke
 
Kizoku Kitai
 
Kei Keitaka
 
Dokuhari
 
Shck56
 
Jojo Soren
 
Klown
 
Latest topics
» Naruto: Fallen Blades
Mon Apr 20, 2015 8:08 am by Guest

» Mirage Hearts
Sun Feb 22, 2015 4:16 am by Guest

» Natsu Dragneel Roleplay
Sat Mar 22, 2014 1:17 pm by Guest

» Naruto Nexus
Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:40 am by Guest

» Bleach Execution~
Thu Oct 24, 2013 2:04 am by Guest

» Bend THIS! An AU Avatar Forum
Mon Oct 07, 2013 10:26 pm by Guest

» Naruto World war
Tue Sep 10, 2013 7:02 am by Guest

» NBR
Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:58 pm by Guest

» Naruto World war
Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:39 am by Guest

Word Counter


[ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]
Current Kages
Click a button to view the Current Kage

Current Jinchuuriki
Click a button to view the Current Jinchuuriki

Affiliates

free forum

NRPG
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso
Naruto: Shinobi Senso Naruto: Shinobi Senso

Share | 
 

 Onishi Bourei (Finished)

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Chemicals

avatar

Posts : 5
Points : 362609
Join date : 2012-08-04

Shinobi Information
Rank: Genin
Health:
200/200  (200/200)
Chakra:
370/370  (370/370)

PostSubject: Onishi Bourei (Finished)   Sat Aug 04, 2012 5:55 am

~The Basics~

First Name: Onishi
Last Name: Bourei
Age: Eleven
Rank: Genin
Village: Sunagakure

~The Blood Work~

Gender: Male
Blood Type: B-
Clan: None
Kekkei Genkai: None

~The Physics~

Appearance & Clothing: Onishi is a small tender looking boy, spills of dark-brown hair lay across his shoulders. He is bookish, staying up all hours of the night reading. He must wear glasses because he strains his eyes so. Sharp attractive features, slightly femenine, but meek. The sign of sunagakure is worn on his left shoulder, it sets on black cloth. Wearing well fitted dark-brown armor, made from leather. This armor covers only his torso, a white long-sleeve shirt is fitted underneath. Black pants that sag on his sandals. One pouch containing ninja equitment is attached to his right thigh, another is on his left hip. Two scrolls are located on his right hip, teatherd to his belt. His sandals are blue.

Height: Four foot; five inches.
Weight: Eighty nine pounds.

~The Traits~

Likes: Reading, puppet inovation, quiet.
Dislikes: Unesecary conflict, when inocents are harmed, killing, obnoxious people.

Personality: A calm courteous boy, never overbearing. Bookish to a fault, most of his free time is spent reading or working on puppets-- time well spent! He doesn't pursue making friends, enjoying most of his alone time. Though does not mind the company of others. A moral advocat, always opposing the harm of inocents. Avoiding confrontation and combat when he can, but will not avoid his duty as a ninja. Onishi doesn't directly want to harm anyone, but he is not foolish.He knows what a ninja's purpose is, to protect and kill when need be.

Attitude: His attitude varies from day to day, situation to situation. To others he does his best to be respectfull and polite, but can be pushed to anger. Though addmittingly, it takes alot of berating to get him to do so. Timid and reserved around newcomers, almost afraid of them. Positive when it comes to learning, always interested and accepting of critique. Enjoys spending time with other puppeteers, for knowledge and assistance in his craft.

~The Armada~

Primary Weapon: Puppets
Support Weapon: Poison
Support Weapon: Paper bombs
Support Weapon: Smoke bombs

Puppet Name: Inoru
Rank: C
Range: 10 meters
Type: Offense
Description: Inoru is a humanoid puppet, sharing a common size and form with humans. It stands at five foot, five inches. Weighing in approximately at forty eight pounds. A shell carved from a dark wood, polished and lacquered. Possessing snow white hair that falls at jaw length. On its shoulders-- covering most of his body is a sand colored cloak. If you got close enough to draw back the cloak, you would see that it has four arms. Inoru's first set is attached at the shoulder on a ball joint-- like humans. Though these arms are curved and appear much too large for its body(if it were being compared to humans, that is). Reaching almost to the ground. These forementioned arms only appear to be capable of movement at the shoulder joint and elbow. The second set of hands are just below the first and share no likeness to them. They mirror that of a humans, all the proper joints in place. Inoru's torso size fits well with its head, not too large. Below there are only two legs.

Weapons:

Chained Kunai launcher-- The mechanism is located inside the puppet at the base of its neck. Its gears are wound by Inoru's first set of arms. Essentially it allows the kunai, which is attached to a chain, to be fired from the puppets mouth. To wind the chain, all the puppet needs do is spin its arms around on the shoulder joint. The mechanism is launched by a high-grade spring, to activate tug with a chakra thread.

Scythe-blades-- Both left and right upper arms, from the elbow joint down are blades. The wooden arm-covers are simply their sheaths. When spun circularly, on the shoulder joint, these wind the "Chained kunai launcher"

Arm compartments-- Inoru's second set of arms each have three hidden openings. They all contain seals which can be replaced. These compartments are opened by chakra threads, and the seals activated with a hand gesture. These hands can also wield weapons efficiently, unlike the first set.

[Chain-Kunai Launcher / Neck and mouth]

[Scythe-blades / Both upper arms]

[Arm compartments / Both lower arms]


~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:

  • Main: Puppetry
  • Sub: Fuuinjutsu

Elemental Affinity:

  • Main: Earth
  • Main:
  • Sub:

Special Characteristics:


  • Quick nimble fingers.
  • Excellent Chakra control.
  • Glasses, duh!


Flaws/Weaknesses: Physically weak, not well matched against taijutsu users.

~Jutsu~

E: 6
D: 2
C: 2
B:
A:
S:
_____________

Jutsu:
 


~The Story~

Family:
Kyoushi Bourei (Father)
Meiyuu Bourei (Father)

History:Onishi was born to two very skilled medical ninja. Both of whom currently aid the Sunagakure ninja effort at the hospital. His upbringing was fairly easy, parents always compasonate and loving. They used to tease him about how he loved to read, saying he was even reading in his mothers tummy. No real striffed occoured until he joined the ninja accademy.

While a good student, Onishi never seemed to fit in with others. Maybe thats is due to his superiour work ethic, he spared little time for fun. He was drawn to puppetry due to their human likeness. They would be his friends, and no trueer found. Many failed attempts at creating would come to pass. One too heavy, the other kept falling apart.

It was at school, through mentoring and lots of research he found the means to craft pheasable works. Volunteering at the hospital(where his parents work) would prove for helpful learning in medical ninjutsu. Through study of puppeteering, he has compiled a bundle of written work,(his own hand) that he would one day see published. While most of it is inconclusive due to his inexperience in combat.

Graduation came early for him, at the age of eleven. More before him have graduated younger, but his parents were proud of him all the same. A team and sensei is all thats left to complete the young shinobi. He looks forward eagerly, hoping to serve the sand with his best ability. There are troubles ahead true, but isn't that life, or at least the essence of life. Uncertainty.

Extra Information:

~The Finals~

Alias: Chemicals is fine.
Best Way to Contact: Private message.
RP Sample: The boy sat at his desk, working away dillegently on a new puppet. Its shape was that of a human, eyes fresly glued, it seemed to stare genlty up at him. In the puppets hand a katana lay, wooden fingers enclosed around the hilt. At this moment he was sewing a crimson cloak for it to wear, stitching every thread carefully and neatly. Throwing it over the puppets shoulders he laughed. Way too small-- It'll need more work. With a sigh Onishi looked out the window, pushing a strand of hair from his view. Index finger pushing his glasses to the bridge his nose. Kids below played and laughed, kicking a ball between them. I wish I could be carefree like that, but no. Too many things plague my mind of late.
Rules Password: Correct


Last edited by Chemicals on Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:43 pm; edited 17 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Klown
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Posts : 32
Points : 364640
Join date : 2012-07-25

Shinobi Information
Rank: Kazekage
Health:
800/800  (800/800)
Chakra:
1000/1000  (1000/1000)

PostSubject: Re: Onishi Bourei (Finished)   Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:50 am

Looks good, however i would like a few changes Smile

Firstly, Please describe his attitude one word is not enough I'm afraid.

Puppetry is it's own specialty it is not a part of ninjutsu.

Finally, History needs to be longer please make it around 4 paragraphs altogether .
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Klown
Moderator
Moderator
avatar

Posts : 32
Points : 364640
Join date : 2012-07-25

Shinobi Information
Rank: Kazekage
Health:
800/800  (800/800)
Chakra:
1000/1000  (1000/1000)

PostSubject: Re: Onishi Bourei (Finished)   Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:03 pm

Seems good, next time however please post that you edited it so i know to check the app in the future Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Onishi Bourei (Finished)   

Back to top Go down
 
Onishi Bourei (Finished)
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Rosalie Malfoy ( FINISHED!!)
» A small heard well actaly a band of arabian mares with faols(finished and NOT a pick n play)
» Scarlett King (Finished)
» Rose Weasley FINISHED
» Elladora Lestrange *Finished*

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Naruto: Shinobi Senso :: Creation Central :: Bingo Book :: Suna Shinobi-
Jump to: